Communicate without the intervention of technology

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manpreet Tuteehub forum best answer Best Answer 2 years ago


I'm writing an essay for my English class. It's about technology and what the world was like before many modern inventions.

I want to say in the past, people used to communicate without the intervention of technology, is communicate naturally a good candidate? I really doubt it though I want to sound brief and natural. What do you suggest?

Edit: The comments made me aware that I should be more specific. I mean the abscence of electronic/electric devices. As mentioned in comments communicating through smoke, ink, ravens, and also face-to-face communication. Is there an umbrella term or expression for these? Something like primitive/primary communication maybe!

Thanks

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manpreet 2 years ago
  1. I think intervention is a superfluous, unneeded word.

  2. I don't like the phrase "used to" in this context; I think it reads awkwardly. I would change it so the simple past (a la Mark Hubbard's comment), or use the word would.

  3. I agree with the commenters; people have been using technology for a long time. The printing press was a technological marvel in its day.

With those three points in mind, here's my recommended edit:

In the past, people would communicate without modern technology.


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